• Mongostein@lemmy.ca
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    1 year ago

    Ah, I’ve seen this problem in storytelling broken down to this:

    You don’t want your story to be a bunch of “and then and then and then.” You want your story to be “because this happened, this other thing happened, then because of that, this other thing happened.” Etc etc.

    Still a good read.